In class we had to write a narrative story based on the prompt which was ‘The gift’. My story was about a girl named Tahlia and it was her 13 birthday and she gets a gift that she wonders what it could be.
Her is where you can listen to me read my narrative story:
Tonight should be good. I say to myself. Birthdays can be a lot to handle, the food, the decorations, the set up and especially me as the birthday girl. All girls are fussy of what that should wear and what make up they should choose.
” Mum!” I yell, as I galloped down the stairs.
” I need help!, what do I wear tonight?” I say.
” Sweaty, just wear something casual, your just at home with some family and friends.” Mum replies with her hands on her hips.
” I’ve got it! I have this cute dress in my wardrobe that I haven’t warn yet!” I said to my mum with an excited face.
Later on, mum had finished putting decorations up, and setting up the food with dad on inside and outside tables. The delicious smell of the food makes me hungry and the amazing decorations makes me happy.
Ding dong! As I walked over to the front door I play around and adjust my dress and flip my hair over my shoulder. The first people to arrive was my grandparents, I have them kisses and hugs and welcomed them inside.
Later on once everyone had arrived, they were enjoying themselves, having a laugh, and eating the delicious food. When mum brought the cake out and dad grabbing the gifts, people started to gather around in the kitchen.
Happy… birthday… to… youuu! I closed my eyes and made a with, my hands were sweating and I was starting to get nervous. I opened my eyes and blew out all 13 candles. I had a slice of cake and it tasted like memories.
Whilst everyone was enjoying their cake, I saw my dad grabbing the first gift to pass over to me to open. Then I thought to myself, what will it be?
I hope you enjoyed my story and in the comments feel free to give me feed back. Thank you 🙂 🙂